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Appreciation, Beauty, Car Accident, Death, Gratitude, Hate, Hope, Life, Noise, Poem, Poems, Poetry, Snow
Beasts, bigots, build the wall:
the sound of lives
beating like a drum
in our face, a chant,
a cheer we hear
thousands of miles away.
Yet, you sing me a song louder
than the thunder of hate,
breath of bird and caress,
snow sound, breaking of twig,
and I must confess
I need to feel as fresh
as the five inches of snow
we nearly left the world to last night
when the light turned green,
but she couldn’t stop her car
from sliding. The beauty of brake lights
glowing off an infinity of snowflakes,
all seen through a fog-window.
And the sound of twisted metal,
sirens, the spark in my soul
when I realized
I’m still alive,
and still part of this loud,
hurting world.
The dead don’t know anything.
But I know
I walked away from the dead
to the sound of your poems,
songs written from the cries
of your heart,
siren calls begging us all
to look the other way,
for a moment,
look, look, look the other way.
Wow! There are so many good things to say about this poem, but because it is a journey that I feel, I don’t know if I can put it into words. Each time I think I know where the poem is going, it takes a step in a different direction. The brake lights image through the infinite snowflakes… I may as well have been seeing a movie rather than reading a poem. You brought it to life. (P.S. I hope this isn’t a true story about you.)
Thanks, NuzMuz. It is true. I was in the back seat of a car two nights ago and the driver pulled out when the light turned green. Our back windows were fogged, and I could see the red brake lights coming at us, but the driver was looking ahead.