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Addiction, Daughters, Flowers, Healing, Hope, Loss, Lotus, Love, Mother Poems, Mothers, Odyssey, Poem, Poems, Poetry, Promises

“The lotus, which was so delicious that those who ate of it left off caring about home, and did not even want to go back and say what had happened to them.”
The Odyssey Book IX
Promises, she heard them all,
the call of her mother’s voice,
she wanted to believe:
This won’t happen again, baby.
Maybe, it was okay to trust
for a while, and rise, like a lotus blossom,
above the mud of her addiction,
floating with petals stretched up to the sun.
Somewhere, she thought,
there is a story of a girl whose love could cure,
and pour itself out as an ethereal blanket,
so magical, together at last,
even their bones would long
to float away in the lotus’ song.
So well done… Insightful, deep, felt as though you knew.
Thanks, Jia. I see where this is similar to your story. I had someone close to me in mind when I started, her experience, but there is always something personal, too, and it gets interwoven. I hope to keep forming this one because it has morphed throughout the day. I think it could use more of that. Vss365 isn’t conducive to changes since it’s on-the-spot composition, but it’s good inspiration.
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Wonderful poetry by a talented writer.
I loved this poem dear Linda. Myth and tale, my favorite.
Thank you 🙏❤️
You are welcome Linda.